Tortured

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    Tortured

     I checked through my email
    one-hundred and seventy-four messages
    nothing from you
    only the spammers love me
    cest la vie

    Amused to find that a straight counterpart
    gets my written words
    try not to read too much into this
    she glimpsed a fraction of a troubled soul
    missed the other 99 %

    Autumn leaves torn from the trees
    cascading to the ground
    in lazy, spiralling patterns
    defecating dogs litter the biking paths
    spent prophylactics discarded,
    died a happy death

    Hands in the pockets
    scarf wrapped around a neck,
    so casually
    not another casualty
    of what society
    decreed them to be

    Known, yet so alone
    must be the ' f- off'  attitude
    a silent statement projected so bold
    an anguished cry, mute on the inside
    never date a tortured soul,
    along only for the ride


    mathiasthom
    written 8/24/09

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    knight4696 commented on Tortured

    09-07-2009

    Great read Great write - A very visually expressive poem with just enough torment to pull it off. Tortured is a great title for this one as well. Keep up the good work. Also - I don't agree with Net's comment below, I don't believe it is appropriate to express them here. Straight, Gay or indifferent. I believe Personal comments should be made by sending a Private Message.
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    mathiasthom

    09/07/2009

    thanks for your comment! I left nettieforce 1's comment there,because she didn't grasp what I was writing about.It wasn't any sort of 'attack' on any persuation...I value different perspectives,even though i may not agree with what was written...

    nettieforce1 commented on Tortured

    08-25-2009

    i really wanted to like this, but i was put off by the f-off attitude i guess which i can't help but think is directed at me: a straight woman daring to "comment" on your poetry. the other 99% is what? please let all of us straight women know ahead of time so we don't make fools of ourselves, ok?
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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