When I Wrote

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Writer's block...what an amazing disease! But then, when the ideas and words begin to flow, the pen does not seem to work fast enough to get it all down on paper, so that not one thought is lost. And then, when we are able to scribe tangible thought, the places that we can be led, or lead someone is enormous. Dr. Seuss said it best, "imagine the places you will go." So, grab a paper and a pen (or in this day and age, a keyboard or a Blackberry/cell phone), and just begin by writing or typing something out. Don't worry about organization or cognizance at this point...just write. See where it will lead you.

When I Wrote

When first I wrote the alphabet,
  perfection was not a high priority;
that first, class paper assignment,
  could use a little work.

Courage escaped me at every turn,
  when I searched endlessly for the words;
I wanted to share with you my heart,
  but found the frog in my throat too large.

More than miles, galaxies apart,
  from distant shores I sought for more;
yet words were nowhere to be found,
  as pen and paper remained anew.

One day organization came,
  poetic prose carried with them meaning;
compliments abound as words are read,
  poetry road maps led me to you.

Now you read what I wrote,
  words organized into tangible thought;
though awards and medallions escape me,
  peace and solace fuel me, to write again.
    © 2007 Randolph D. Brown, Jr.

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JaleesaSoco commented on When I Wrote

02-13-2010

This poem is humbling, I like the lines "Though medallions escape me, peace and solace fuel me, to write again." Good write. :)

Shilohii65

02/14/2010

Thank you for reading and responding. Honestly, I am honored and humbled that ANYONE actually reads and appreciates what I write...not a lot of compliments and encouragement in my upbringing. Again, thank you for your time and kind words. Randy, Wichita, KS

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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