Their Tree

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Here's a showing for Frost...that Bender of Birches. The inspiration for this poem came from a movie (which happens quite often), titled, "Here on Earth." It is a chick-flick...rent it and watched it...with a few hankies.

Their Tree

Castle walls protruding high in the sky,
  tickling tails of storm clouds, yet tame,
towering taller than cypress or rewood,
  shadows cast down from their stout frame.

Eyes like a drive-in's silk screen,
  providing her a panoramic view at life,
fear does not visit, while in his midst,
  harmony knows her, casting off strife.

Might greater than gravity,
  his will could not cure,
like pages written by Frost,
  a memory that is so pure.

Smiles bring life to her once more,
  tis' her laughter I miss,
joy of hitting home runs, scoring goals,
  or just sharing in that first kiss.

Beyond bounds, thicker than blood,
  a love stronger than an old birch tree
for her eulogy, a favorite by Frost,
  a wood box held what was left of me.

Randolph D. Brown, Jr.

Copyright ©2006 Randolph D. Brown, Jr.

 

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Crush commented on Their Tree

09-25-2012

absolutely beautiful ! going ino my faves and yes,10 !

Isaiahjanae commented on Their Tree

02-05-2010

What an amazing poet you are. This is another 10. Its depth I cannot fathom... This poem I don't understand as much. I like how you entwined Frost into it.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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