Button Beach

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    God's grace is sufficient. I could say more about the story behind this poem...but I am going to let this one marinate. Blessings...Peace of Christ <

    Button Beach

    On beaches there’s sand,
       my heart held by your hand,
    with buttons, your blouse adorn,
       you’re gone, I’m forlorn.

    Grains lie on the beach,
       for you my heart can’t reach,
    what wrong did I do,
       now keeps me from you.

    On beaches I walk,
       to you and God, I talk,
    a lengthy stretch, miles long,
       wonder, wonder, what went wrong.

    Glass, stone, drift wood,
       these things I understood,
    faith, hope, charity,
       gave in to such a calamity.

    God promises peace, joy,
       for us He gave a boy,
    on the beach I smile, sit,
       revel in Father’s wit.

    God is good, He is great,
       to Him I pray, on Him I wait,
    He is faith, hope, love,
       I cling to His promise of…
     

    …on Button Beach.
    © 2009 Randolph D. Brown, Jr.

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    Isaiahjanae commented on Button Beach

    01-30-2010

    This will go down in history for me, as one of MY personal favorites. This made me cry with GREAT joy of what depth to your character you have Randy. I think this poem is so very, very beautiful and yet, sorrowful. Thank you !!! :)

    Shilohii65

    02/03/2010

    Thank you for your comments. You know, honestly, I read great poets works and they do not strike me as always such great pieces either. Some how I just don't see that in this one, although I do like parts of it and get something from it. Thank you though, for you liking it so, and I am glad it spoke to you.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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