Penny Well

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    I liked the idea of tossing pennies into a well, and wishing beyond hope. So, I thought I'd give the idea a try and see what came of it...you know, sometimes you just gotta say, "got milk!" Or, in this case, "got pennies."

    Penny Well

    A blue moon,
      air quiet and still,
    alone I sat,
      on a stump, on a hill.

    Just a glimpse,
      her face, her smile,
    sitting with me,
      reflecting all the while.

    Instead I awoke,
      no word or hint,
    where she sits,
      where she went?

    A new day dawns,
      clouds full and gray,
    no hand to hold,
      jus’ walkin’ away.

    As if on cloud nine,
      captured by her spell,
    tossing nickels, dimes, quarters,
      into the penny well.
        © 2005 Randolph D. Brown, Jr.

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    Isaiahjanae commented on Penny Well

    02-26-2010

    Sounds beautiful and like "young love". Nice poem :)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

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