Victory Villanelle

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    Victory Villanelle

     

    When darkness falls, and life seems in disarray

    Like when something first came to be.

    Life is bright and will surely show the way.

     

    When Order followed the new array

    And the stars constructed from loose debris

    When darkness falls, and life seems in disarray…

     

    Death follows life as night follows day.

    A stirring then in that ancient sea!

    Life is bright and will surely show the way.

     

    A strange fish began to stray

    And the seas’ loss was the land’s glee

    When darkness falls, and life seems in disarray.

     

    Eons pass, men join the stately fray,

    Seeking more… perhaps to be free.

    Life is bright and will surely show the way.

     

    Oh nations, please hear this plea

    And come to believe with me,

    When darkness falls, and life seems in disarray

    Life is bright and will surely show the way.

     

     

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    Tempy commented on Victory Villanelle

    07-20-2009

    death is the first step to life it's like kaos or destrution is step one
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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