Patches*

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    Patches*

     

    Patches, a small mostly white cat,

    With black fur placed

    On her body without artistic charm.

    She lived under a summer cabin

    And raised litter after litter

    Of kittens

    On mice from the woods.

     

    In summer,

    The summer people fed her well

    And she lay happily in the sun.

    In winter,

    She took care of herself

    But looked forward to

    My offerings of food.

     

    The summer people

    Had her “fixed”

    (and one of her daughters)

    and so

    she no longer needed

    to frantically hunt for food

    for her young.

     

    Slowly she and I came to

    Know one another,

    And while she couldn’t quite

    Let me pet her…

    She would squirm happily

    Just out of reach

    On the wooden porch.

    Her movements were always

    Full of life and the love of it!

     

    Then,

    One day she came for her food

    …but slower…

    and I saw death standing

    on the corner of the cabin porch.

     

    The cabin stands

    Cold and empty this winter.

    As I walk by it

    The snow falls silently

    And the nights seem little longer.

     









    *...the end of the story...about a month after I wrote this poem, Patches appeared at our cabin door (about a mile from the cabin at which she lived) hungery and alive.  Then with cat wisdom she charmed her way into our cabin (warm and dry) and lives, where she lives today.

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    poetryrules commented on Patches*

    11-24-2009

    I'm a sucker for cats and love this poem. I'm glad to here she came to fully accept you. A little wordy--see if you can reduce the word count. And the last line (meaningful) needs an 'a' as in 'a little longer.'

    Hiporlacking commented on Patches*

    11-22-2009

    That was a cool little story. And I don't even like cats.

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