The Night Of Eternal Light

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The Night Of Eternal Light


My eyes are closed
to shield myself
from all that burns
when I dream

Through the acrid smoke
into the heart
of the darkest soul
I can see

In your finest hour
share your last breath
with the setting sun
then come dance with me

Fight the wrath of time
as a never ending spirit
that yearns to be reborn
and lives to break free

These eyes empty and glazed
this skin pale and cold
this long dead heart
exists as a shadowed memory




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irreverent commented on The Night Of Eternal Light

01-14-2011

You write beautifully. The final stanza is heart stopping in its sense of finality. Death is an enticing muse.

aysha commented on The Night Of Eternal Light

01-03-2011

I love your writing!!!! You are very gifted. It just takes me breath away... Wonderful poem

danmartyjake1 commented on The Night Of Eternal Light

11-11-2010

All of your poetry is remarkable and stunning. It is hard not to feast on your prose. ;-

ginga commented on The Night Of Eternal Light

09-20-2010

Artie, The yearning and request in this poem are what makes it mesmerizing. ginga

Artie

09/26/2010

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this

Po8ree commented on The Night Of Eternal Light

09-16-2010

I like the way you hook the reader with well crafted imagery.

Artie

09/26/2010

Thank you, and welcome to the site.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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My Final Prayer 1
A Whisper Behind The Scream 3
She 2
Miss You 1
Speechless 1
Clarity 2
Believe 3
The Song Of My Life 2
A Piece Of Me (2012) 5
The Children Of The Night 5
House Of Cards 2
A Journey To The Surface 3
Until Next Time 2
Sinister 2
One Life 3
Irreverent Pleasures 19
Prelude To A Nightmare 23
Scratching The Surface 27
Conundrum 19
Defeated 33
The Blood Of The Poet 35
Beyond The Looking Glass 24
Embraced 22
The Night Of Eternal Light 18
The Forbidden Fruit 19
The Creator Of Tomorrow 15
The Band Played On 16
Mortal Memories, Immortal Thoughts 22
Fade 23
Unfinished & Untitled 16
The Machine 16
Instrument 20
Beyond My Grasp 26
The Day I Lost Aim 17
Cyclone 18
I Await 52
A Decade Of Stone 18
#1 20
The Mask Of Fear And Doubt 13
...they don't exist 12
A Breath Of Air 16
More Of You 18
Hostage 10
Soulless Solace 14
Power Outage 15
Why I Believe 23
Duet 21
Forever Unfinished 28
Gravity 24
Cosmic Smoke 46
Surviving The Storm 36
Feed 29
Everyday 23
Reborn 35
Overcome 35
Hmmm... 28
What Does This Mean To You? 31
The Beacon Ignited 18
Purify 25
Endless 12
One Moment In Time 30
A Peek Inside 28
A Piece Of Me 20
The Ocean 26
A Beacon Of Light 27
1987 26
A Cold Future 15
The Child Who Could Fly 43
Your Path 20
The First Thoughts Of Love 28