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    In my world, it's the darkness that shines
    the wind moves to my will
    shadows are alive
    and angels are on fire


    The sound of your heartbeat
      echos beautifully in my ears
    A hunger awakens within
    causing my mouth to water with thirst


    The blood that flows
    just beneath your skin
    calls out to me
    begging for release


    Oh, how good it feels
    to hold you in my arms
    I can hear Christ weeping
    from the sound of your screams


    I tear into your flesh
    draining the life
    from your fragile veins
    till your iris expands
    to absorb the sight of heaven


    It's within these few moments
    when all you have seen
    all you have felt
    and all you have ever dreamed
    becomes a part of me

     

     

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    SuSpence commented on Feed

    04-15-2010

    Damn Artie! I love this one. Some really really good lines in there 'I can hear Christ weeping from the sound of your screams'. I can definately see the vampire connection you eluded to, but at the same time this sounds a lot like my ex girlfriend LOL. I really liked it.
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    Artie

    07/09/2010

    Ahh Haaa! I think this is the first comment you didn't use a song comparison!! Lol - thx for the read

    stellar commented on Feed

    01-17-2010

    This poem is addicting...captured that vampirish thing perfectly...I love the paradox and the style..awesome...Great write///:)
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    Artie

    07/09/2010

    Thx Stellar, I'm glad you enjoyed this

    therejected commented on Feed

    12-06-2009

    wow that was intense. i could see it as if it was happening before my eyes. great imagery. i love it
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    Artie

    12/06/2009

    I'm glad you liked it thx for the read

    Hiporlacking commented on Feed

    12-05-2009

    -Till your iris expands to absorb the sight of heaven.- Some intense imagery,my friend.
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    Artie

    12/06/2009

    Thx Hip - glad you enjoyed it

    PoetsofBlood commented on Feed

    12-05-2009

    maybe, you need to use earplugs, before you feed, lol, in your craving needs, I love it, :) Alexia....
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    Artie

    12/05/2009

    Lol - the weeping of one, can be music to another lol

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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