Beyond My Grasp

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    Beyond My Grasp



    Relentless I search
    forever I wait alone
    always wanting, you

    Relentless I search
    the prison within my mind
    contains all I know

    Relentless I search
    an endless mountain of dreams
    has led me to you

    Relentless I search
    for the right words that reveal
    my feelings for you

    Relentless I search
    for meaning in my small life
    to face tomorrow

    I search for a way
    seeing you beyond my grasp
    relentless, I search



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    JadedJezzabel commented on Beyond My Grasp

    07-31-2010

    I love poems that begin and end with the same line.....gives the impression that everything has or will come full circle.......this is devine.
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    DrewMcNee commented on Beyond My Grasp

    06-16-2010

    We often find when we cease to seek. Tomorrow will come whether we wish or know.
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    Artie

    07/18/2010

    Very insightful words - thank for the read

    Chaos128 commented on Beyond My Grasp

    06-15-2010

    The relentless accept no limits, which is why they're the ones that make the most progress (see above composition for confirmation of this concept). : )
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    Artie

    07/18/2010

    Lol - awesome comment!! Thx for reading my work

    dahlusion commented on Beyond My Grasp

    06-04-2010

    Yes! be relentless, never tire, never stop dreaming. A powerful write in all of its creative brilliance. Bravo!!
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    Artie

    07/18/2010

    It's the only way to keep moving ahead - Thanks for taking the time to read my work

    jademelissa74 commented on Beyond My Grasp

    06-04-2010

    Artie, this is such a poetic offering to those whose place in life has been challenged by the desire to want and not be able to obtain. Your words are always so piercing. I have been aways for quite sometime and now I am slowly getting back to my own self. Thank you for sharing...God bless~
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    Artie

    07/18/2010

    It seems like there is always something just beyond our reach. Thank you for reading my work

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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