Remembrance and Apologies

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this is a counter point poem to 18, this one written first back in '94. they both reflect the love and pain i have felt for nearly two decades, for the love of a woman that no other has ever been able to erase from hy heart.

Remembrance and Apologies

I see your face often,
remembering a love long gone.
I think of you sometimes,
remembering what went wrong.

Never since those days
when we lie in each other's arms
has there ever been a love
that has made me feel as warm.

It's been long years since we last talked
and I've wondered if somewhere deep down.
If there's ever a glimmer, a reminder of the days,
of the life and love we've both known.

And yes I know you are happy know,
having all you have ever wished.
Yet there will always be a part of me
that wonders if I am truly missed.




B Heath  Harris/(c) 2009

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Platti commented on Remembrance and Apologies

08-06-2010

I really like this piece, I believe that everybody in such a position feels the same. =) good work my friend.

raziel69

08/06/2010

thanks very much. this was one of my first ones, done many years ago. i appreciate the comment...

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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