Heartwork

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Heartwork

Heart-filled sorrow and mind-numbing pain;
these are two feelings I won't feel again.
I live each day now with a new found power
from a love that grows stronger every hour.
When I was young I thought it was a game;
never really concerned with knowing a name.
Finding another and performing the act,
and remembering to keep my mind intact.
Then came the time when I felt it was time
to settle my self and be more sublime.
The one that I chose I thought I could trust,
yet time would prove there was more to her lust.
A wife and a child, my first family endeavour,
would prove to be my worst mistake ever.
The only thing I kept was my loving daughter
and she's been with me, giving me laughter.
I later found myself in that position again;
a marriage of convenience hoping to gain
some symblance of what my humanity was,
but later I found a new purpose, a new cause.
I sought to make a future with a love from my past
and build a new life that I know now will last.
I love you, my lady, as I did long ago
and I promise that I will never let you go.
There's no one else for me, I will never stray,
and I will love you until my dying day.
Sending my thanks every day up above
to the One who saw fit to return my love
to my side and my heart, my mind and my soul
now fully restored; at last I am whole. 



B Heath Harris/(c) 2010

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soulwriter commented on Heartwork

10-14-2010

Oh, the perfection and splendor of finally finding the one who makes us whole... filling every hole that every gapped our heart. Well expressed my friend. Write ON!

raziel69

10/15/2010

when you find your muse, it isn't hard to lay down your thoughts and feelings, and i indeed have found mine again. thanks for stopping by, much appreciated...Raz

knight4696 commented on Heartwork

08-20-2010

Raz .. I believe this to be one of your best man .. so emotionally open and honest , not everyone can write like this, Awesome job Pal! :) Ken

raziel69

08/20/2010

i am blushing a bit, Ken, thanks for your kind words. sometimes i hit a stride and a topic just flies out of me; sometimes good, sometimes...again, thank you very much for reading and stopping by...Raz

SavVySam commented on Heartwork

08-15-2010

How appropriately befitting ...to live ones life with the full potential of ones heart...synchronous "Heartwork" ! Great story poem!

raziel69

08/15/2010

thanks so much for dropping by, Sam, i appreciate the comment...Raz

angel33614 commented on Heartwork

08-14-2010

Simply love the title as it is so fitting to the story of your poem as it represents the story of your life, bravo! Beautiful write my friend, filled with pain, agony, torment, love, joy, rebirth, all wrapped up into one poem, very hard to do and you did it with near perfection. Many poets write about flowers, trees, birds, a mountain, and all this makes for beautiful inspirstion and great poetry but the emotions of one's heart poured into the fabric of the words as it spills from your pen and into our hearts keep, this is powerful beyound the words of mere comparison. I can relate to this poem in many levels as I think all of us have gone through a similar journey searching for that one truth of true love. A never ending struggle of emotions at times, till one day a star is born. I hope this star holds a place for your love, great write! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL

raziel69

08/14/2010

Angel, I am flushed with pride after reading this, and i thank you dearly. this was one of those poems that just came streaming from my subconcious and found its own life here. and the star of the poem is my muse; she allows me to feel things that i had almost regrettably forgotten. thanks again for the words of praise, i appreciate it greatly....Raz

ApaqRasgirl commented on Heartwork

08-14-2010

that was wonderful dear,,,,,the power of love there is none greater....your words painted such a pure picture of true love and desire to be just like so many in love and with family.....loved it dear...great write.....thanks for the read.....love asha

raziel69

08/14/2010

thank you very much for the praise, Asha. and thanks for friending me.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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