Crystaleyes

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    this on was written a couple of years after my first marriage, and the girl in question really didn't know whic side she was batting for. i tried to help her make a decision, but in the end we lost one to the other side. oh well, at least she is happy now, lol.

    Crystaleyes

    I haven't written 'bout love in quite a while
    'cause there hasn't been much to make me smile.
    I love my daughter, she loves me to,
    but that's not the love my heart pursues.
    Don't disbelieve for I'd give my last breath
    if it meant I could save my baby from death.
    The love that's been missing from my life
    was killed, burned, and buried by one I called,'WIFE'.
    Now, for some odd reason, it's risen again;
    but this time it's coupled with doubt and pain.
    The one that I love cares for me, to,
    but she has rivers of confusion due
    to knowing what she wants,but what she can't have.
    And I just sit by feeling wave after wave
    of envy, of passion, of joy, of grief,
    wondering if my battered heart will e'er find relief.
    Of course I could be wrong or maybe just dreaming
    of words, looks, and touches that send my soul screaming.
    In time I will see if it's victory or demise,
    'til then I'll just let my heart crystalize





    B Heath Harris/(c) 2009 

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    knight4696 commented on Crystaleyes

    09-19-2010

    Raz .. We win some and we lose some .. but if we stop pursuing, we are no longer in the game. Be strong and love on! One day when you least expect it .. you might be the one being pursued. Great write Bro! :) Ken

    raziel69

    09/19/2010

    once again, i appreciate the praise. she was a lost cause, but still worth putting down on prose. thanks, Ken...Raz

    WordSlinger commented on Crystaleyes

    08-03-2009

    this is transendent, no one has a poem, like this, its a balled'''up, and ya throw, and catch, don't drop the ball, your great bro.. thank you.. John E WordSlinger

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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