Acrostic

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Acrostic

Anyone can write a poem, but does it make sense?
Coming across with an idea and making it intense.
Random words slapped out in some romantic form.
Open up people's minds and hearts in a literary storm. 
Seeing strange visions that some may find frightful.
Telling a story that others may find delightful.
Intelligent words spoken or just some psychobabble.
Clearing the crap and cobwebs of everday rabble.










B Heath Harris/(c) 2010  

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mdpoetgirl commented on Acrostic

08-24-2012

Acrostics are some of my faves. This one delivers and captures our attempts at poetic writing perfectly, with only a few words. Great job!

raziel69

08/24/2012

thanks, md, i appreciate you taking the time to read my work.

thecross commented on Acrostic

01-11-2011

interpretation and conclusion is only what the eyes and mind are able to see and decipher, you pointed this out in a matter of fact way well done

Marsink commented on Acrostic

01-07-2011

This is coupled meaning with good meter and rhyme. I believe a poet can write whatever he/she dictates is worthy, in a style of their leisure, but there is a price to pay if one is producing mundane, inane, mediocrity--you have risen above it all! Excellent! Applause Crescendo!

raziel69

01/08/2011

You make me blush, my friend, and I appreciate your gracious words of praise. thanks you for such a profound comment and keeping my sights focused.

MindNumbing commented on Acrostic

08-13-2010

I'm such a huge fan of the acrostic form and you've done a wonderful job with this one! A poem written about poetry and confined to specific parameters can't be easy to write... nice job :)

raziel69

08/13/2010

thank you, sir, i appreciate it...

SavVySam commented on Acrostic

08-13-2010

Awesome acrostic gets the point across in grand fashion!;)

raziel69

08/13/2010

thanks again, Sam, for your comment. i appreciate all of the comments and criticisms i recieve from my friends, it helps me to become a better writer.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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