HEAR MY PRAYER

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    HEAR MY PRAYER

     

    A simple request that I have on this day.

    That my prayer comes close enough that the Lord may hear.

    As it finds itself on the path to the most perfect way,

    While my soul receives the comfort of HIS presence near.

     

    Nothing special that I need on this day.

    Just the pleasure of knowing that my GOD still cares,

    As I added a little faith with the words that I pray.

    Giving HIM the recent updates, just to keep HIM aware.

     

    Nothing special that I request on this day,

    Just my soul, receiving the feeling that YOU are still there.

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    duty commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

    11-04-2010

    You made a deposit in someone's else's account today. The fewer the words, the better the prayer. Your poem is the doorway which the human soul passes from selfishness to service and from solitude to kinship with ALL mankind.. This is a 10.....AMEN
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    orsonav

    11/04/2010

    Thank you very much for continue to read and comment on my work. May God bless you as you continue your services of Him, by serving man.

    WordSlinger commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

    07-17-2010

    Orson, you are a wonderful spirit/man, he hears you, :), ty WS
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    duty commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

    03-23-2010

    Your poems are great,so awesome Reaching souls near and far, Each poem serves to remind us How richly bessed we are.
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    orsonav

    03/23/2010

    Thank you very much for your kind words Duty. May God richly bless you.

    Mareann commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

    11-08-2009

    Very beautiful poem, shows much expression and passion for God. Simply lovely,, Mary
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    orsonav

    11/08/2009

    Thank you for reading my work. May God Bless you.

    Karma885 commented on HEAR MY PRAYER

    11-07-2009

    wow in a way this poem is sooo peacful i like the poem and the story. i can picture what your sayin in the poem. so i have a image in my head. this poem get a 10!!!....BE SURE TO READ SOME OF MY POEMS N COMMENT
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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