The Whore's Heart

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The Whore's Heart

A whore's heart can still be forgiven, even though the life shes liven is so misdriven. I envision hope for to make the decision, to walk away from the life that dragged her down, the outkast of the town, the people know shes been around. What is left of her reputation, nothing left not even a simple expectation, no explanation she needs to look around and be lead to God's salvation .

Everyone in town knows this girl, only 18 never shy to the world
growing up she shined like a pearl, till the death of her mother rocked her  very world.  At the age of 16 started doing drugs, never clean runnin' the streets till 3 am with barefeet. Then she'd crawl her way home so high , what her father could only do was break down and cry. What happened to his lil' girl that had changed his world. What had happened to her dreams smothered by this world. 

She just needs to walk away, but her own dreams continued to die that day. Would she ever change to make an impact, or be sucked into the system only to crash. Every day after midnight, she would run into the spotlight. She would stand on the corner under the streetlight, only wishing to make 20 dollars for her streetlife.

It's so so sad, that this lil' girl's dad had it all, he had it all. What has happened his lil' girl changed, turned from a princess now dragged down by chains. He had poured out his heart from day one, but life wasn't over he was far from done . He knew he had get her help. Look to God to simply save herself. He knew it might take months or years, trying so hard to hold back the tears. Where was God in the midst of this , Where was a solution to this major fix. When all her dad had to was pray , the very day his lil' girl ran away. He was longing so bad for her to change, maybe find God , go to church and be saved. He was trying so hard to hide his pain , hoping his girl would come home some day.

Now 2 years has passed and his daughter now is grown, ran away from home at 16 , out and all alone . So heres the good news to this story that I'm here to tell, here and her dad reunited , it went well. She got off the drugs finished school and got a job. She's working to go to college , shes working oh so hard. Now she goes to see her dad and ask for his fogiveness. Daddy will you forgive me for those years I had no business, running off like that leaving you on your own , to wander if his daughter was ever coming home. Yes, dear I forgive you for the years I lost. Although you may never realize the painful cost. The cost of losing soemthing as precious as you. I wish i never had that to go through. So please promise me to write when you leave for college and always know that your love I will acknowledge.

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JadieD commented on The Whore's Heart

07-19-2010

Your poem was nice to read b/c it had a sad and compelling story. I enjoyed the ending as well. Nice pacing too. Nice work!

ladynight commented on The Whore's Heart

07-16-2010

an amazing trully emotional write winter. so many people walk around with a straight face and no one really know the pain and turmoil that they hide. just goes to show you what we as people overlook everyday. your poem had wonderful rhythm and flow. loved reading it. and the happy ending at the end was nice.

am2anangel commented on The Whore's Heart

07-15-2010

a heartwrenching difficult tale that turns our alright in the end. well done.-tonya

bluewolf commented on The Whore's Heart

07-14-2010

How easy it is to pass judgment to those we do not know, especially in such a situation as expressed in this poem. Each time I see a man/woman/child that has a life on the streets or in jail for a crime, I always see in my mind’s eye a baby’s birth and from that point up to now in this person’s life. What made them come to a point in their lives where they lost their way? And then I think what if my child was the one on the street or in jail: I would want compassion for them not condemnation.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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