Perhaps You Think

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There must be a better way - than religion

Perhaps You Think




Perhaps you think
I do not care
For the human plight

But care I do
More than you know
It's not a thing of fright

The only thing
That makes much sense
At least to my own sight

Is that we do it to ourselves
And live long enough to resolve
To turn the wrong to right

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Hampton commented on Perhaps You Think

11-29-2009

Nice write that contains a lesson for all to ponder.

Artie commented on Perhaps You Think

11-29-2009

I agree - the path to this place, is a different journey for each, requiring different needs for all. 10

Stryx

11/29/2009

Absolutely - we have our own and individual Karma

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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