My Treasure

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My Treasure



Strangled cry doth love bequeath
pon troubled heart expire
tears stream down from eye to cheek
to prove the pain you sire

Pain and sorrow tis loves mistress
it makes joy felt overwhelming
for without one the others less
fulfillment intertwined they bring

So feel the hurt and relish pain
for with them comes the pleasure
of unrequited love the gain
for which I'm sure we'll treasure

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cynthiakehl commented on My Treasure

06-23-2009

love this style of writing,...very vivid words of the opposites that come together as one love. nice

am2anangel commented on My Treasure

06-23-2009

very passionate poem of pain and yet the hope of a love not rejected. I enjoyed your words and the flow of this piece. well done.

poeticmaster69

08/01/2021

Thank you very much

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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