Secrets

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    Secrets
    Not another secret
    Hurry, tell me, please
    Then I will keep it with me
    Does that put your mind at ease?

    Too soon, it starts to wiggle
    This thing has come alive
    It begins to spread deep down
    Before I can count to five

    It has worked its way into my mouth
    'Stop', my tongue begins shout
    I open up my lips to speak
    "OH,NO!" the secret's out


    MDA

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    1blackbarbie commented on Secrets

    02-20-2012

    very cutely yet strongly written poem. I enjoyed reading it
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    ShanneN commented on Secrets

    08-06-2010

    haha that's usually how secret telling goes... good write, nice job!
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    Mandi

    08/06/2010

    thankew

    Doo77 commented on Secrets

    09-30-2009

    Nice very well written nice tempo little suspenseful too love it!
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    Mandi

    11/02/2009

    thank you for tkaing the time to read my poetry

    rougepriest commented on Secrets

    09-23-2009

    lol very cute little poem but says a mouthful too. your very clever at this. loved it
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    Mandi

    09/23/2009

    cute? it is so very true. Secrets are what is killing mankind.

    bobarobbob commented on Secrets

    08-27-2009

    Love it. Very hyper. Good words and tempo. :o) Nicely done.
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