You Took Everything

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    You Took Everything

    You broke my heart,
    and you don't even care,
    You stole my dreams,
    and you don't even see,
    I gave you my life,
    You took it with strive,
    and then you tore it,
    and threw it aside,
    I gave you my heart,
    you took it with care,
    and then you broke it,
    and ripped it apart,
    I gave you my world,
    you took it and smiled,
    but then you destroyed it,
    and took it all away,
    You said that you loved me,
    and yet you're with her,
    and yet you deny it,
    but I see her in your eyes,
    so go and be with her,
    and just leave me be,
    I can go on without you,
    you just wait and see.

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    Brownsultry commented on You Took Everything

    03-26-2009

    DARK, VERY ANGRY--I THINK IT IS GREAT!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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