You Look At Me

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    You Look At Me

    You look at me you see happiness,
    you look at me you see joy,
    but if you look in my eyes you can see,
    that I am not who I seem to be,
    you can see the pain I deal with everyday,
    you can see how I let my life fade away,
    if you care enough to look closer,
    you can see my life is almost over,
    I've lost the will to live,
    I've lost the will to stay,
    I've lost everything I love,
    I think I'll end it all today.

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    Blackrabbit commented on You Look At Me

    09-08-2009

    More power then any words should have. You can feel nothing but emotion from this and you feel for this person. And you wonder about them. Too many people feel this way. good job. Rabbit

    ListninEar commented on You Look At Me

    05-14-2009

    Gosh, I sure hope you don't kill yourself!!!! All of us feel this way at times. I hope you have found someone to talk to about the feelings that are poured into this poem. It makes me sad for you!

    BeeJaiJaqui

    07/11/2009

    -nods- indeed I have found friends and a love that saw the sorrow within myself and they are helping thru my worse times

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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