The Goodbye Dance

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    The Goodbye Dance

    He dances farewell to her memory
    Saying goodbye in his own way
    While others look on from the side of the floor
    Some try to keep up
    But inside he’s with her and the steps only move faster and harder
    He can’t deny it any longer
    It’s always been dancing
    She’s always had his Heart since the first step
    How to let go
    He dances with a ghost
    Others see a torn dancer, dancing by himself
    He does not see the side of the floor, nor the club itself
    He only sees the past
    He only sees her
    He knows it’s over so he dances in his own little world
    Inside himself
    He says goodbye “My LOVE” with every step
    And every drop of sweat is nothing more than a tear in disguise
    Over Her
    He arrives before the floor is even open
    Dances till the DJ’s played his last song of the night
    Last to leave the floor
    Still alone on the way home
    Reality has hit
    She’s gone forever
    His love remains forever hers
    He dances to say Goodbye

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    EvilEyes commented on The Goodbye Dance

    02-22-2009

    What can I say.... You write from the heart.... Excellent poetry. Thank You!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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