Long Sleep for the Hearts wait...

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Long Sleep for the Hearts wait...

    Let a murder kill me in the night

    Let a car hit me on the road

    When it’s my time it’s my time

    Just don’t let that time be without her

    I don’t want to live without her

    I’d rather meet my maker

    Than another breath without her

    She’s the happiness in my heart

    In my life

    Please GOD let her return soon

    I Love her Always and forever

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    bforibus commented on Long Sleep for the Hearts wait...

    07-12-2009

    I just read a longing poem but this one blows that one out of the longing area. this one was pleading and begging and hoping and not taking a no for an answer demanding. great job on the flow and emotion put into it.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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