Good Bye

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    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Good Bye

    We said good bye
    We haven’t seen each other for over a year
    We haven’t even been in the same state for over a year
    You don’t speak to me anymore
    You don’t miss me anymore
    You don’t cry over me anymore
    You don’t even think about me anymore
    We said goodbye
    Although miles apart I’m never far away
    I never leave you in my thoughts
    I never stop thinking about you
    I’m always with you in my Heart
    In my dreams I still cry over the moment you said it’s over
    We said goodbye
    We’re apart but not far from each other
    Your as far from me as your last memory of me
    I’m as close to you as my last Heart beat
    You date now
    I still wait for your return
    We said goodbye without just reason
    But we still said goodbye

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    angel37 commented on Good Bye

    08-02-2009

    wow, this one is really amazing... Goodbye is never something you want to be saying to someone you thought would be there forever. It's probably the worst feeling in the world. I've never understood how some people can move on so quickly while it takes so much longer for others to heal.....

    AbysmalGoddess commented on Good Bye

    06-28-2009

    This almost stole tears from my eyes... I know exactly how this feels, it's even over a man who fought in Iraq. I hope you two can work things out, I really do. Best wishes. A beautiful poem, it is full of emotion and relentless pain.

    allenjermy commented on Good Bye

    01-02-2009

    I gave you a 10, This is what im talking about. I love this one. I am longing for my love like this.You pulled my thoughts right out of my head. Bravo...Don Folks

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