From Pieces to Hole again

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    From Pieces to Hole again

    Isolation

    Closing myself out

    Please don’t hurt me

    Pain reminds me

    To stay in isolation

    I don’t return calls

    I don’t visit

    Drowning in my loneliness

    I can want as much as I can breath

    That does not mean I can breathe under water  

    Just cause a fish can

    Those things said Hurt

    What’s not said Hurt’s even more

    I am unhappy

    I will remain so

    Until a women strong enough is willing to Love me

    To spite current emotions

    Then and only then

    Will I be happy

    When I’m no longer alone

    But rather more Loved!

    I will be happy

    When I’m Loved

    By a Beautiful strong Hearted women

    That will be the glue

    That puts together this

    Broken Heart of mine

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    bforibus commented on From Pieces to Hole again

    10-29-2009

    wow. i stay reading you and getting slapped in the face with reality. great job. must be reminded that you are out here to be read, because i see im missing some gems

    TilMyLastBreath

    11/05/2009

    thanks dude for the feed back!!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    TilMyLastBreath’s Poems (48)

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    Good Bye 3
    Decisions 2
    Lost Keys 3
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