Lost Keys

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Lost Keys
    I’ve lost my life, I’ve lost my keys,
    The key to my Truck
    The key to my Office
    The key to my apartment
    And the most important key of all,
    The key to my Heart
    Who will find the keys to my life,
    Who has my Keys?
    Will they return them?
    Will they try and steal all that I have?
    Will I have to use spare keys to go about my everyday life,
    Will I have to get cheap spares made and replace all the locks in my life?
    I can’t live without access to my own Heart,
    Who has my Keys?
    Where are my Keys?

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    lisagrizzly commented on Lost Keys

    12-29-2009

    Can you help me find the key to my brain lol... I enjoyed your poem. I feel this mad panick but yet this simple message of if there is no love there is nothing. Happy New Year and ty very much.
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    AbysmalGoddess commented on Lost Keys

    06-28-2009

    This made me feel the emotion of laughter and tears of sadness at the same time, the clash resulted in a brief sigh of understanding. I LOVED the metaphor you used, this was extremely well written! 10 from me!
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    bforibus commented on Lost Keys

    12-26-2008

    Sounds like the character was in a mad panic. Disturbed. I like it
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