Decisions

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Decisions

    The world around says let go
    My Heart says wait
    Who am I to let go, to give up on her foolish mistake
    If I Claim it, Call it, Say it, Declare it: True Love
    True Love knows no limits and has only one, adultery and she did not commit adultery
    So then who am I to let go, give up
    What right do I have then if my Heart says this is the one
    Give me one good reason, not another excuse
    One “just” reason in Loves eye!
    There are none, I must wait
    There are none, so then I must endure loneliness’s cruel pain
    Time does not matter, just the way we use it…

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    nickyssecrets commented on Decisions

    05-03-2009

    I can understand, however you know my views on "only adultery can end a marriage or Love." Therefore I can not agree. However, I don't have to in order to enjoy the read. Thank you for sharing.

    bforibus commented on Decisions

    12-26-2008

    Yea, i remember that pain. let it go that stress can kill u

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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