Still

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  • Lost Love
    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    Still
    Still
    Shadows of you walking with me
    Reflections of you standing next to me
    Memory’s of us in each other’s arms
    Dreams of you calling, of you knocking on my door, of a letter
    Traveling to the far corners of the earth for a solution that makes sense
    Searching for an answer to your riddles and games
    Exploring the truth for a way to bring you back
    Relocating to a place where we can start over
    I miss you more than any other thing in my life
    I Love you with everything I have to offer a soul mate
    That’s never changed
    Yes I’m still waiting
    Always and forever

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    nu2ya2000 commented on Still

    07-04-2009

    Any one who can capture and bring out emotions in others like you can is a true poet. Good job
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    wordCollective commented on Still

    05-11-2009

    There is no greater pain than love that is lost. Im sorry for your loss =(
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    tenderpoison commented on Still

    05-04-2009

    I love the desperate resignation, it comes across as absolutely genuine.
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    allenjermy commented on Still

    03-31-2009

    ive been gone for awhile, trying to get my head right, but as the days gone on, nothing changes. i see the same for you too, the heart aches for its shadow in the afternoon summer.Always and forever, exploring the truth,searching for the anwser, to the solution that makes sense.Nice...Don Folks
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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