---Now---

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    • TilMyLastBreath
    • Lost in that Sunset forever (July 19, 2007), Why did you leave me on that roof?

    ---Now---

    Moving forward has never been so hard

    and settling down so difficult,

    Being comftorable is not an option

    when faced with defeat,

    One man standing at the horizen

    just waiting for the moment,

    Thinking to himself, Deep within himself,

    He doesnt understand the culture around him.

    Feeling out of place when srounded by beauty

    that doesnt see him in the same way.

    Life's irony settling in and his Hope gets smaller.

    He closes his eyes and drifts into a deep sleep

    where he see's her,

    and she wispers to him

    "Dont give up, your not the only one"

    With a deep breath and swet pooring down the side of his head

    he felt foolish for thinking the way he did.

    He was just a Man

    He only knew how to live a structured life style

    He wanted to be happy the same way as every one else

    he just needed to sleep more often to get more words of wisdom from

    the women he saw in his sleep

    Lost and looking to find the way again

    he just wants to find what everyone looks for

    What others seem to place a smaller value on

    what some others run from

    what some others rush into

    what some others never find

    Moving on has never been so hard...

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    spbsdude commented on ---Now---

    07-12-2009

    Very nice poem. Who is She? Moving on is hard, but someitmes it is necessary.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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