ORIGINAL POETRY DOT CALM

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    ORIGINAL POETRY DOT CALM

     I'LL NEVER FORGET MY FIRST DATE.
    SHE WASN'T QUITE READY, AND YELLED,
    MAKE YOURSELF AT HOME DOWN THERE.
    SO WHEN SHE FINALLY CAME DOWN,
    I WAS SITTING IN MY UNDERWEAR.

    SHE WAS DROP DEAD GORGEOUS ,
    FROM HER TOES TO HER HEAD.
    I MEAN THAT LITERALLY.
    WHEN I TOLD HER SHE WAS GORGEOUS,
    SHE TOLD ME TO DROP DEAD

    SHE EVENTUALLY SUCCUMBED TO MY CHARMS.
    BUT I GAVE HER CPR AND SHE RECOVERED.
    WE HAD A VERY ROMANTIC HONEYMOON.
    WE MADE BEAUTIFUL MUSIC TOGETHER,
    UNTIL SHE CHANGED HER TUNE.

    SHE SAID I DON'T WANT TO CONFUSE YOU
    WITH THE FACTS, OR ANY DECEPTION.
    AS GROUCHO MARX ONCE SAID,
    I NEVER FORGET A FACE,
    BUT IN YOUR CASE I'LL MAKE A EXCEPTION

    AFTER THAT DEBACLE, I WENT TO MY PSYCHIATRIST.
    HE TRIED TO SPARE MY FEELINGS WHEN HE SAID,
    A BEAUTY AND THE BEAST ROMANCE IS VERY RARE.
    I'M SURPRISED YOU AREN'T DEVASTED BY THIS.
    SHOULDN'T YOU BE OUT ON A LEDGE SOMEWHERE?

    I'M DOING BETTER NOW, I'M STILL IN THERAPY THOUGH.
    I GAVE UP THE COUCH FOR A COMPUTER SCREEN.
    I QUIT MY PSYCHIATRIST AND NOW I'M MORE CALM.
    INSTEAD OF FIFTY BUCKS AN HOUR, TO SAVE MY MONEY.
    I'M DOING MY THERAPY ON ORIGINAL POETRY DOT COM.

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    Emek commented on ORIGINAL POETRY DOT CALM

    10-04-2009

    Funny twisted tale..hilarious witty and straight..love love loving it!
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    Brianlion

    10/04/2009

    I'm glad it made you smile. Mission accomplished

    fathi1943 commented on ORIGINAL POETRY DOT CALM

    08-01-2009

    Hilarous! I can't stop laughing. You chose the cheapest and most rewarding therapy....do.com
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    Brianlion

    08/01/2009

    Thank you sir.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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