Always a Room With a 1

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Always a Room With a 1

I haven’t seen you in a while
it’s been eleven long years since,
and tonight, for the first time
in a long time,
being with you feels like home.
Estranged;
but never the less a homeland.

We always tend to
end up in a hotel room
with a 1 on them.
always playing on the TV
something with Kurt Cobain,
and being with you again,
feels like home all over.
Sixteen years later,
No means for an end.

I think we understand
each other so well;
almost like we are one in the same.
I think that’s why
we both know undoubtably,
we could never be together;
like we once where
together again.

I will always love you
as you have a piece of my heart.
I know for certainty,
we will meet again in the future;
to travel to the past
in a room with a one
on it again.

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dahlusion commented on Always a Room With a 1

06-29-2010

"I will always love you as you have a piece of my heart. I know for certainty, we will meet again in the future; to travel to the past in a room with a one on it again. "—i love the feeling of this closure. bravo!

redbloodink commented on Always a Room With a 1

06-26-2010

this write is a # 1 I know this feeling I know this meaning... meeting another soul and knowing another soul....... But it's just not the 1 you were ment to be with in this life.... great write..... red

pdxgrrll

06/26/2010

Thanks Red. I was just finally inspired again. :) You leave the best comments.

redbloodink

06/26/2010

awe I'm glad you were moved....... red

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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