We Will Be Alright

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    New Poem written this weekend. 6/20/2010

    We Will Be Alright

     We will be alright
    I'll be by your side
    I won't let you down
    But I gotta know
    No matter how things go
    That you will be around.
    But if I should break
    If I should fall away,
    What am I to do
    I need someone to take
    A little of the weight off of me,
    Just as I would do for you.
    You're just the one
    I've been waiting for.
    I'll give you all
    I have to give and more,
    But don't let me fall
    Into the black hole of uncertainty.
    Take a little time
    Let’s get the balance right,
    Give back a little love,
    Give me just enough
    So that I can hang on tight.
    You could be the one
    I love forever.
    I hold you high above it all,
    I know you know
    My love is unconditional
    Despite the pet peeves,
    My heart vocalizes
    We will be all right.

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    Rhymer commented on We Will Be Alright

    07-10-2010

    Love the optimistic attitude maintained through this write. Nice piece.
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    pdxgrrll

    07/10/2010

    Thanks Rhymer. I was just going to send you a message asking you to review some of my writings. :)

    pdxgrrll commented on We Will Be Alright

    07-10-2010

    This poem is for my daughter
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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