When I Met You

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    8th poem in my notebook. this is a poem i wrote when i was dating a girl named Leah and she really did make me happy but it turned out that she need to be happy so i left her for her sake of getting better and we have bothed moved on and i am in a wonderful relationship now =D

    When I Met You

     When I met you
    I was dead
    I've put the bullet through my head
    When i met you
    I was dying
    And now each and every day
    I'm trying to be happy
    Because you make it so easy
    And I never wanna leave you
    Cause you help me stay sain
    When I met you
    I was broken
    And you're taping me back up
    When I met you
    You changed my life
    In my best way you could
    You saved me
    From darkness
    And put me back
    In the light
    When I met you
    I was nothing inside
    But now when we talk
    I'm full to the brim
    Stuffed with the joy you give me
    When I met you
    I fell in love with you
    instantly

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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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