It's Okay

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4th in my notebook

It's Okay

Sometimes it's okay
to die
mentally
to just
let it all go
just blow out the fuse
on your life in your head
and then maybe then
everyone will know
how you feel

But they won't
cause as long as your dead
mentally
no one will see
the inside of your head

Sometimes it's okay
just make sure
you come back

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LeslieMay commented on It's Okay

09-23-2011

Always make sure you come back. Empty your mind, let it all go, but then realize what your thoughts are worth. Good poem, Kind of sad.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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