Drowning in Love

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    this isn't reall i just made it up

    Drowning in Love

     My hand grabs yours
    and our fingers intween
    and we lean in
    as our lips
    touch
    for the first time
    my love for you is so intense
    im so deep in love with you
    that i cant come back up
    and im drowning
    at the moment i see you
    my heart skips a beat
    and as my world falls apart
    you are there to hold it up
    to keep me from falling
    and hurting some more
    and i cant wait till the moment is right
    and i ask you that question that we've both wanted for so long
    "Will you marry me?"

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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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