Why ?

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Why ?

I can't believe you would lie to me;
after all you knew I had been through,

You told me you loved me, and would always be there,
but now I know that's not true.

The pain you have caused me; the rage and despair;
Are just too much for, my heart to bear.

I trusted in you; and believed all your lies,
but now my heart is broken in two. 

For I loved and trusted you so completely;
and I just don't know what to do.

Why would you do this to some one you love;
some one you say you cared for;
Some one who loved you so completely;
that she would have given up everything.

But now it's finished; over and done; just as quickly as it began,
Because of the lies that you told; and the trust you betrayed,
All you left me was pain in the end.

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mustascheman commented on Why ?

12-30-2010

I won't even say anything about the content....the poem, as such, is very well written and intelligently constructed. This piece also has a smooth flow and transition from line to line. I shall have to read more to find out if your other poems have this same flow and intensity. Great job. A.T.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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