WHO LOST

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WHO LOST

WHO LOST 04’

 

As I sit here I feel the walls closing in,

I feel the sadness start to take over,

all WE are left with is pain and hurt,

And so I have to wonder.....
 

my God what were YOU thinking, 

do you really have no clue,

 of the heart ache and pain,

that WE would all suffer,

because of the choices,

 you made for "YOU" !
 

As the despair of life's problems 

start seeping into my bones

I have no place to hide, or run for cover,

No longer have the simple comforts of home.
 

all those years ,a lifetime of love,

so much taken from US that day. 

all the joy and all the wonderful memories, 

"YOU" simply tossed and threw away.

YOU made a decision, a decision 

 that effected so many......

 

God, SO MANY, not just you. 
 

Selfishly "YOU" moved forward never considering,

the devastation your choices would have,

and never considering what your choices would do.
 

I don’t know this person you've become, 

the man I once knew and loved is gone.

In his place is this MONSTER

who completely, utterly, and beyond repair

has torn and ripped our world apart.
 

But I'm a firm believer in Karma,

one day "YOU" will look back and see

WE loved you, loved you with all we were

loved you UNCONDITIONALLY.
 

Though WE may have lost so much

 my soul mate ,their Father that day,

I believe deep down in my soul,

"YOU" have lost the most, and

you will see, YOU WILL FEEL IT one day

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phatdaddee commented on WHO LOST

05-13-2011

Wow, this peom shows how one can lose so much more than it seems is truly at risk and also how many lives are affected by a bad decision. Deep soulful writing Bree.

BreeLove

05/13/2011

thank you very much..... its not a complete cure, but its good for the soul sometimes to just write what u feel, good or bad!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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