BABY BOI

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i have people inmy life most would say are not the "best " , but i like to think we are not judged based on our mistakes big or small, past or present, god knows i would be in trouble along with most pointing fingers . that being said just love me for me regardless, and ill do the same.

BABY BOI

HE SMILES AND MY KNEES GET WEAK

I’M TOLD HES JUST TROUBLE TO STAY AWAY

AND THOUGH HIS PAST MAY NOT BE PERFECT

WE ALL JUST DO WHAT WE HAVE TO DO

TO MAKE IT THROUGH ANOTHER DAY

 

I HAVE NEVER BEEN ONE TO PASS JUDGEMENT

WE ALL HAVE A PAST, THINGS WE WANT TO HIDE

SO ALL I CAN SAY IS THAT I CHOOSE MY FRIENDS

HAVE FAITH AND STAND BY THEIR SIDE

 

AFTER SPENDING TIME WITH HIM

HOWEVER SHORT IT ‘S BEEN

I CAN TELL HES HESITANT TO LET ME IN

AND SO HE PUTS UP THIS SHELL THIS “HARD ASS “WALL

BUT I SEE RIGHT THROUGH, I SEE THE REAL HIM

 

I SEE PAST HIS “BAD BOY” PERSONA

PAST THE HUSTLE, PAST THE GAMES

BUT WE ALL HAVE MADE MISTAKES ALONMG THE WAY

WE ALL FIGHT, FIGHT TO MAINTAIN

 

WE HAVE ALL DONE THINGS WERE NOT PROUD OF

SOME WHICH HAVE CAUSED US SHAME

BUT WERE ALL JUST HUMAN BOUND TO MAKE MISTAKES

ONLY TO SURVIVE, AND MAKE IT THROUGH THE DAY

 

SO BABY BOI I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW

NO MATTER WHAT YOU’VE DONE

IT MAKES NO DIFFERENCE TO ME

THAT’S ALL IN YOUR PAST

ALL THAT MATTERS ISNOW

AND YOU HAVE BUT TO SAY THE WORD

AND I’M YOURS ALL YOU WANT OR WILL NEED.

 

To Drew my friend regardless … xo Bree 1.23.2013

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slimgoodwoody commented on BABY BOI

02-01-2013

Bree baby!! Great poem! You are truly a loyal and devoted friend and any man should feel honored to have you by his side! Ride or die!! Good luck and lovely words!!

dahlusion commented on BABY BOI

01-23-2013

"AND YOU HAVE BUT TO SAY THE WORD AND I’M YOURS ALL YOU WANT OR WILL NEED"—solid passion!

BreeLove

01/24/2013

thanks for taking the time to read and comment :)

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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