Beautiful Black Man

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    Beautiful Black Man

    Have my eyes deceived me or do I truly see
    A Beautiful Black Man who I long to please
    whose eyes are like that of a chocolate sea
    with depths untold of wonders yet to be revealed.
    His gaze has captured me and taken my breath away
    and my body longs for him in a way words can't explain.
    This stranger I see on my computer screen
    whose life and desires are unknown to me.
    There he is just as real as you or me,
    This Beautiful Black Man who's captured my curiosity.

    I have put myself, my thoughts, and my feelings on the line
    now let's see if he is worth it or just another waste of time.

     

     

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    Sorealpoet commented on Beautiful Black Man

    02-10-2012

    Wonderful piece. Kinda makes you want to read more.
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    KING commented on Beautiful Black Man

    12-06-2011

    A taste of up lifiting not seen or given to us much. When validation comes we must take it and cherish it.
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    slimgoodwoody commented on Beautiful Black Man

    03-28-2011

    What a wonderful poem! I hope that your BBM is exactly what you deserve and desire! Life is short and full of disappointments but sometimes you can push just the right buttons and you get what you cherish most! Keep it movin' Bree!
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    Sx9 commented on Beautiful Black Man

    03-08-2011

    this is your love your desire and your chances,so what id he just play and hit well thats how desires and fantasy played out,it is the will to have and feel good doing it,,love your vibes sis,,
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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