Untitled WTD5

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    Untitled WTD5

    Untitled WTD5

    I'm dying inside and trying to understand why you did this to me;

    But I feel even worse for her; for the years that she gave,

    And the betrayal of her inner most trust.

    How could you do this not only to me; but to her whom you say that you loved,

    Your sweet lying lips never revealed; how you broke our inner most trust.

    You took advantage of not only our love; but of our precious time, our life we gave;

    So now it's you who will have to deal with that guilt, until your dying day.

    But I wonder; if you could do this; do you have a heart at all,

    And if your conscious is even bothering you; you must have thought you had it all.

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    EyesOfRain commented on Untitled WTD5

    09-07-2012

    So I read WTD1-5, and decided to lump my reviews into this one. I think that they all need to be read in sequence to grasp the story behind this piece. Whoever, and whatever, the person is who made you feel this way should be ashamed. I rather hope that this is not a personal experience of your but instead an empathy piece for someone else. I had read your poem WITH LOVE before these and hoped that I would see more happiness to come. Whatever it is about these poems that has touched me I cannot pinpoint, all I know is that reading them has left me with the urge to give you a great big hug. Great job with your writing, and with wringing the emotions out of your readers.
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    BreeLove

    09/10/2012

    thank you, and it was a progression from a time we met , and it seemed like I had finally found someone who I could love and give my all to, we met as friends, I was going through my divorce, and he listened, then the friendship grew into something more, but in the end it was all a lie, and he betrayed me , but in some ways his betrayal was worse then my husbands, because he was suppose to be my friend he knew what I had endured and suffered under my husbands lies and deceit and betrayal, I feel like he took advantage of my weakness, and used it to his advantage! his was a greater offense. But I still hold out hope that one day the right person will come along, even though life has consistently shown me otherwise! Here's to Hoping !

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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