My Sweet Jamaica

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My Sweet Jamaica

Our time was short but sweet; and I will cherish it all my days
And though we may never be more then friends;
I wouldn't change a single thing.

 The joy we shared if just for a day; was very special to me,
Your laugh, your smile, your playful ways, all meant the world to me.

 You wore no disguise you were just yourself from the start,
No pick up lines or beguiling words, and for that you have my heart.

So many times men say all the right things,
thinking it's what a woman wants to hear,
But I prefer a real man not a fraud,
I'd prefer you keep it simple, just be real.

All I ask that you never lie to me;
life is too short for the games people play,
As long as you give me the choice to choose,
for you I will do the same.

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Sx9 commented on My Sweet Jamaica

03-08-2011

so yes you have endure the beauty and sun and sea sand and rich people of the rock,,thanks you for your vibes of praised,the need to really see for your self the beauty of paradise,yes it is yard to me and I love it,,stay safe sis,,nice write..

slimgoodwoody commented on My Sweet Jamaica

01-03-2011

I love this! I always tell people that when you first meet someone you are actually meeting their "representative", the person that they want you to see. The representative carries a briefcase full of cliche's and politically correct sayings. They pull out chairs and open car doors. (continued later)

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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