Sweet Dreams

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Sweet Dreams

Sometimes I feel it's me against the world;
and I have nothing left to give,
I have lost so much; my love and my joy, even the will to live.

 

If I died today; how many days would it take for people to even notice,
That I was gone; no longer here, except in memories and photos.

 

I love my kids don't get me wrong; but this pain is just to real,
And if it weren't for them; and the sin against God, 
It would probably be a done deal.

 

I would pull the trigger; bite the bullet, and finally be done with life,
For the pain would be gone, the lies done and over;
and I would no longer have to fight.

 

I pray for the day when it finally comes; that perfect permanent sleep,
For I know when it comes; my sleep will be pleasant,
and my dreams will be oh so sweet.

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phatdaddee commented on Sweet Dreams

12-31-2010

Sad state but not an uncommon one. You have too much to offer the world to leave it now! Besides I have so many more harsh, unthinking, rude and unfeeling comments to make to you! Lol!!

BreeLove

12/31/2010

lmbo...... thank u for making me smile, and i look forward to what ever u have to say....... ;)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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