BrokenHeart2009’s Profile

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  • Age: 43
  • Location: Littleton, CO
  • Gender: Female
  • Country: US
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My life has been sad lately, and I feel very alone. I walked a sinful path, and now am paying for the deeds I have done. My heart was broken, and my dreams shatter. I hope the two poems I present to you open your eyes to both sides of the coin. Also, they were both frogs, the one was married and the other cheated on me with a girl in a mental hospital. Yes, you read that right, a mental hospital. I don't know which one of us was more crazy. However, I can help but think it was him.

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eleacep profile comment

10-13-2010

Starting is the key. The words will flow and before you know it the hurt will go. I understand what you are going through.
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spbsdude profile comment

10-08-2010

It is sad to see one so young have her heart broken and dreams shattered. I did a few years ago, and the healing process is helped by getting your feelings down on the page. Hope you find gentle healing through the writing process.
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wildpendigus profile comment

10-25-2009

Just keep writing and you'll master this art!WP
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oldgoat

01/11/2011

Master the art of writing? I'm confused, writing to me is not how well words rythme or are put together, it's things of the heart. You have to look for the heart and reason why something was written, not how well it is written... Dang, saying that makes me feel old! lol! Well, guess I am getting older, not old, just older! lol! Don't ever take anything I say in a put down way, I really don't mean anything bad, it's just me and who I am. I honestly do look for the heart in things, writing, heck, I'm better at math! lol!

Bestkept

01/13/2011

@oldgoat, writing is a personal form of art or expression however, the best part of this art or this craft is constantly conforming it. No your poem doesn’t have to rhyme all the time yet a consistent scheme make it flow easier and easy for memorization as well as delivery when read or heard. I find myself a bit serious about gifts we have.

oldgoat

01/14/2011

I do agree with ya, I just really look for the heart in things, what's behind the writing. I have never considered myself a poet or writer, I just put feelings on paper because it's such a great emotional release. To me, the art of poetry is not in the writing, the art is a release of feelings hiding in a heart...

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

BrokenHeart2009’s Poems (33)

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Let Go 5 01/02/2012
A Crush 1 08/09/2011
Waiting For An Answer 2 07/28/2011
Creepy 3 05/22/2011
Question 2 04/22/2011
Endless Fall 2 03/06/2011
Men Are People 26 01/13/2011
Final Words 11 01/10/2011
A Gift to Mankind 6 01/07/2011
Together We Say Goodbye 6 01/07/2011
Your Wife 9 01/04/2011
No One to Save Me From The Dark 5 01/01/2011
In The Beginning 3 01/01/2011
You And Me 1 01/01/2011
My Daughters 7 12/30/2010
Lonely 4 12/30/2010
Don't Leave 2 12/30/2010
The Sounds of a Broken Heart 4 12/13/2010
Regret 7 10/10/2010
Twisted 7 10/06/2010
Hold Your Vows 4 10/02/2010
Love's Bite 3 09/30/2010
Shame On Me For Being With You 11 09/11/2010
The Kiss's Coal 2 09/07/2010
You Reap What You Sow 5 09/02/2010
In Love With A Lie 5 08/31/2010
My Story 5 07/29/2010
Warning 2 07/27/2010
Leave Me 2 07/26/2010
What Do We DO? 3 12/15/2009
Goodbye and a Smile 3 08/10/2009
Adultery's Shame 4 08/05/2009
The Sound of No One 3 08/05/2009
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