Wandering Soul

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    Not sure when I wrote this or if I wrote this for my donor. I think I did but not 100 percent sure!

    Wandering Soul

     I'm weak and weary, but aware of my despite
    Here in hell, there is no light
    Screams of pain and suffering rattle my ears
    For in hell, I cannot shed a tear


    The weakness inside intensifies with every breath
    Praying I will get swept away with death
    My angel, still hasn't shown her faithful face
    My energy, my faith I musn't waste


    Not to pray or hope all to quickly
    My soul is now deathly sick
    I fear the devil may soon realize I'm at his gates
    For now I cannot control my shakes


    My wings have become tainted with blood
    My body slowly getting in-gulped in mud
    Hope is slowly dying, will I ever be saved?
    I must have failed in life, for my path to hell has been paved


    God knows my prayers, pain and sorrow
    So hopefully you will come tomorrow
    I fall to my knees and I'm about to give in
    You have now shown up to forgive all of my sins


    To take me away from the pits of hell
    For my soul, god didn’t want me to sell
    He sent you to bring my soul home
    For now, I never have to roam

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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