To My Son

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    Just a little Hiaku for my son

    To My Son
    Your no longer an infant.
    Independence now,
    Protection is fading fast.

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    CHOK commented on To My Son

    10-10-2009

    whoa how could u have known soumthing so small can make an impact!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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