The World Started Spinning Today

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    The World Started Spinning Today
    The world started spinning again today,
    I felt its jolt of energy as I was thrown back into reality,
    I thought I'd always be a broken record,
    But it turns out all broken records can be fixed and played again,
    Again,
    And again,
    I'm still living,
    I'm still walking,
    I'm still here,
    Waiting for whatever comes my way,
    Whether it be good or bad,
    I'm still living,
    The world started spinning again today,
    Can you feel it too?

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    redbloodink commented on The World Started Spinning Today

    04-12-2010

    Yes i have felt it for a long time....... this was spun over the top... great job..... red
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    danyellmarie commented on The World Started Spinning Today

    08-06-2009

    Many of my very old poems (not posted on here) are similar. This is amazing.
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    WinterFrost commented on The World Started Spinning Today

    06-22-2009

    Good attitude. Nice shape art to go with the spinning top imagery. Short, clear, concise. And I like poetry that ends with a question. Very nice effort.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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