Broken Heart

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Broken Heart

I’m falling apart,
My heart screams for me to pick up the pieces,
But I just cant,
because with each glance at every broken shard,
The tears stream from my bloodshot eyes,
And I cant see the path in front of me anymore,
Im dying,
To see the light,
Im dying,
To feel real emotions,
Not the ones I allow myself to feel,
Im dying,
To find ‘the one’ who is supposedly out there,
Although im convinced he’ll just break my heart,
And rip the band-aid off of it,
Because they know that’s all that’s holding me together.

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sammia commented on Broken Heart

06-22-2009

this is very good, its also sad....I do know what your talking about. I have went through what your saying in this poem...very good

kmeadows commented on Broken Heart

06-22-2009

I really like this. I can feel what you are trying to portray. I like the fact that you didnt force a rhyme here, it would not have done it justice. Its great the way it is. Heartfelt and sincere. Great job!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Twinopolis’s Poems (39)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Hole In My Chest 1
Given Up 1
Idk 1
Emotional Roller Coaster 2
Headache 3
Momma 1
Strength 1
Army For The Heart 3
Angst 2
Weight of the World...BEGON
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2
Unkown Title 4
Sick Feeling 5
Untitled One 1
My Medication 2
Hold Me Tight 8
Inside My Pen 5
I'm the Type of Girl 8
I Hope To Make Something Of Myself 4
My Worth 3
Not Refundable 1
Lady in Waiting 7
Forever 0
Fantasies 1
Neverending Rivers of Tears 4
Broken Heart 3
Lies and Deciet 2
Done 0
The World Started Spinning Today 4
Wondering 1
Words to Fill in the Blanks 1
Because Of You 1
Love 1
Moving On 0
Karma 3
Suitcase 3
Waiting For You 0
Heart Shaped Portal 0
I Cried For You 3
Worries 6