Lady in Waiting

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    Lady in Waiting

    I just want him to tell me,

    Does he like me?

    Or not?

    He teases me,

    Looks at my friends,

    And tells me he likes them and me,

    But I want him to do more than just like me,

     My fantasies come alive at night,

    Pictures of him just holding me,

    And then lightly kissing me,

    Telling me that he loves me,

    And that he’s sorry he has to leave,

    And I understand,

    He says he’ll be back,

    And I’ll wait.

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    Darkxaster commented on Lady in Waiting

    06-28-2009

    awwwwww thats so what do people call it o yea hot i want a guy to do that with i like it and you made me think than you lol
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    cliftondurant commented on Lady in Waiting

    06-23-2009

    GOOD POEM ALWAYS FALL IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE WHO WILL LOVE YOU BACK A ONE SIDED LOVE AFFAIR IS NOT GOOD
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    Chaos128 commented on Lady in Waiting

    06-23-2009

    Existential and direct. You've not only written a good poem, Twinopolis; you've written an excellent one. Ten thumbs up and for real!
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    AmadeusEx commented on Lady in Waiting

    06-23-2009

    tender and young, youre like fresh shoots of green grass just struggling to reach the sun...lol...and be grazed upon by careless sheep...i remember those days though...this brought me about 12 years back in time...well done
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    passionsdance commented on Lady in Waiting

    06-22-2009

    very good start . You are a young poet and from what I see you are already forming into a passionate one. try playing with words. when I was your age I used to read the thesaurus for fun ... all in all this is a wonderful poem . I hope you get the guy :)
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    Twinopolis

    06/22/2009

    Guilty lol I read half the dictionary in seventh grade foe the heck of it lol

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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