RAIN

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    RAIN

    water droplets fall tears from the
    clouds above
    Why do they cry? I wonder what
    it would be like to be a tear
    fallen from above touching people
    seeing into their hearts, minds, and soul
    seeing what hurts the the most
    wondering how people can blame their selves,
    I wonder
    why people cry?
    why they bottle them selves up inside
    Why do teardrops so soft fall
    so hard from the sky and from peoples hearts
    Why does it rain so hard?

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    Musicmynded1 commented on RAIN

    03-30-2010

    All i am gonna say is WoW!... with expressions like these someone in your town is lucky to have you for a friend;)

    winterkou commented on RAIN

    02-26-2010

    Why I wouldnt mind be a raindrop - nice write - i like where your going with this write .

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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