kept inside

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  • Scars
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  • Cutting

    Poem Commentary

    how i feel when you talk to me the way you do. and the past week you've hurt me so deep i've started back cutting. its hard to handle i'll be the first to admit

    kept inside

    what have i done, to deserve this pain?
    how long has it been? you claim i am not sane.
    i've kept my cover, hidden for so long
    you tell me to speak? so i'll write a song

    the scars on my skin show the hurt i've seen
    and the stains you see they show i'm able to bleed
    im just like you, made of skin and bones,
    i've got emotions too
    one day i will show you

    the reasons i've dealt the way i do
    in the end was all because of you
    i dont want you to hurt the way i do
    so ive always hid it all from you
    acting insensitive the way you do
    i've put the blame on me, always instead of you

    grasping just to hold on
    but seeing my life?
    i guess it's already gone
    im sure you've got somethings
    that you're just dying for me to hear
    well bite your toung it's time i spoke out my dear 

    the scars on my skin show the hurt i've seen
    and the stains you see they show i'm able to bleed
    im just like you, made of skin and bones,
    i've got emotions too
    one day i will show you

    this part of me that no one see
    do you hurt me just to watch me bleed?
    i know i've done somethings, things i've come to regret
    but do i really deserve, to be hurt again?

    do you trust me enough to let me say,
    how many pecies of my heart you've hurt today?

    the scars on my skin show the hurt i've seen
    and the stains you see they show i'm able to bleed
    im just like you, made of skin and bones,
    i've got emotions too
    one day i will show you

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    GenUWinePoet commented on kept inside

    06-07-2011

    try spell check at least. the idea is good but song needs work.

    amithissecret

    06/09/2011

    i actually used spell check on this well besides the capitalization i have automatic spell check on my computer thanks to google chrome. and thanks for the read!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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